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[交流] Writing Activity 1, December 4th to December 6th (Three articles available)

Guys I know English writing has become more and more an issue.

Having seen this, I want to run a series of writing activities for the following month.

Feel free to participate.

Just keep in mind.
No matter how much you read, how much you listen, if you never ever actually write something,
there is no way for you to write a good article in examination condition.

If you do not want to write anything but have the proofreading ability, you are also more than welcomed to pick up others' mistakes

All the writing activities will be put in a folder I made.
You can subscribe it if you want.
http://muchong.com/bbs/taotie.php?action=view&ttid=46562

After you finish writing this topic, please post your article here.
If I've got enough time, I can do some proofreading for you but it's not guaranteed.
I will highlight the articles I think highly of.

Activity one:
Some people think the media should not report details of crimes to the public.to what extent do you agree or disagree?

[ Last edited by Lopemann on 2013-12-11 at 15:58 ]

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Lopemann: 回帖置顶 2013-12-06 19:11:44
00waterh: 金币+30, ESEPI+1, lope,it takes me more than ten minutes to scan your article,i must say that you have been my teacher. 2013-12-07 09:00:04

Alright, I am ready to post my article here.
Hope you guys have written up your own versions as well.
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@00waterh

We are living in a time when civil rights to know the truth clash with other objective factors necessary to be taken into consideration. In my opinion, details should be withheld by media workers and the government, for there are more drawbacks than the merits that the detailed reports may bring.

On the one hand, detailed reports may include something improper for kids that is the largest drawback those reports have, as they may pose bad effects on the young. They are known to include information about drug abuse, children abuse and somewhat like that, which is an overwhelming impact on teenagers. The young lack the basic ability to tell right from wrong, so they can be easily misled, and consequently go astray.

On the other hand, details of reporting those crimes may become an unknowing way to offer resources by which the criminals perfect their methods of committing crimes, thus resulting in even more crimes. In this case, a wide range of new ways of crimes come into being constantly, which has been already posing great obstacles to the police. As for criminals, therefore, the details of crimes could be a resource of achieving enlightenment. By learning from the details, those criminals can think up more sophisticated methods to commit crimes, which undoubtedly makes it harder for police to tackle, and which increases fear among the public.

To summarize, I don't think that details of crimes should be revealed, due to the fact that children may be misled and that criminals could study from them so much that they would do greater harm to the society and bring more fear to the public.

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