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readbycandle

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"to be replaced ... " 那一串做什么成分呢?是定语吗?如果是定语,那就很别扭了。
11楼2012-08-20 18:50:44
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zhangwei19

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但是我还是觉得这个句子是有问题的,尤其是最后一句的waht song,应该是which song 或者直接what,而且这种句子太复杂了,一般人不会这么写吧,这完全可以分开描述
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12楼2012-08-20 18:53:49
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mac194

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FLAWED:
  Out are questions on leadership and management style to be replaced by ones on what you would do if your work was cancelled for three hours or even what song best expresses your personality.

TRY:
  Questions of leadership and management style are out (of vogue).
  More popular today are questions like:
    "What to do if you were let out of work for three hours ?"
  or
    "Which song best expresses your personality ?"
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  "Which song"  NOT  "What song"
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