24小时热门版块排行榜    

查看: 2126  |  回复: 8
当前只显示满足指定条件的回帖,点击这里查看本话题的所有回帖

etin

荣誉版主 (知名作家)

优秀版主优秀版主

[交流] 发英语邮件时最常犯的三个错误(转载) 已有5人参与

A recent post on the DailyMuse outlined the most common business writing mistakes you don’t even know you are making. Before you draft your next email, consider the following examples of bad habits to avoid:
  最近职业女性社区DailyMuse在线版上刊登了一篇报道,指出了商务写作中最常见的错误,有些错误甚至你都不知道自己正在犯。在你下次起草一封电邮之前,看一看以下列举的这些发邮件时的易错处,尽量避免这些坏习惯吧:
  1. “btw, need u 2 sign tom. thx.”
  “顺便说一下,谢谢把这份邮件转发给Tom”
  Being too casual in an email may lead the receiver to think (A) you are unprofessional and not taking the conversation seriously, (B) too busy to address their needs, or (C) they may have no idea what the heck you are talking about in the first place. Business should always be handled with care and this can by done so by taking the time to properly communication regardless of how laid-back the environment is.
  在写邮件时用词太随意可能会让收件人产生以下想法:(1)发件人不够专业或者没有认真对待此次谈话;(2)发件人太忙了,都没有时间来说清楚自己的要求;(3)不知道发件人到底想要干什么。所有商业活动都需要认真对待,不管身处什么样的环境,都要花时间来进行恰当的交流。
  2. “It was a pleasure meeting you yesterday!! Looking forward to our next encounter! Take care!”
  “昨天见到你很高兴!!期待下次再见!保重!”
  Exclamation points are sometimes 100% necessary in business emails to express enthusiasm and even good manners, but overusing this punctuation takes on a whole new and unwanted meaning. With one too many exclamation points, your positive attitude turns…. quite weird and unwelcoming.
  在商务信函中,有时使用惊叹号是有很必要的,可以表达出热烈的情感和良好的礼仪。不过,过分使用标点符号就会适得其反了。就像上面提到的这句话一样,滥用惊叹号来表达积极情感反而会让人觉得奇怪和不受欢迎。
  3. Subject: Meeting
  主题:开会
  First, imagine how many emails professionals receive a day. Now, imagine how many emails professionals receive a day including the word “meeting.” Subject lines are the filtering mechanism and the best way to draw help the recipient distinguish the reason behind your email. Don’t be vague in your subject lines. It is your job to summarize the body of you email.
  首先,想象一下一个职场人每天要收到多少封电子邮件。现在,再想象一下有多少封邮件中会带有“开会”的关键词。邮件中的主题栏是一种过滤机制,让收件人可以更好地区分出每封邮件主旨内容。千万不要在主题栏中含糊其辞,你有责任把正文内容提纲挈领地展示在邮件主题栏中。
转自:http://learning.sohu.com/20120711/n347863930.shtml
回复此楼

» 收录本帖的淘帖专辑推荐

科研软件教程 论文写作 收录 博士资料
liuy034

» 猜你喜欢

» 本主题相关价值贴推荐,对您同样有帮助:

淡定如风,坚毅如艾
已阅   回复此楼   关注TA 给TA发消息 送TA红花 TA的回帖

seagrove

禁虫 (文坛精英)

小盼妞

优秀版主优秀版主

引用回帖:
2楼: Originally posted by mjlyxm at 2012-07-11 16:32:27
学习了~~

猫咪!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
最近迷上林峰了,一直觉得人家过帅不值得迷来着……=_=!
3楼2012-07-11 17:05:42
已阅   回复此楼   关注TA 给TA发消息 送TA红花 TA的回帖
查看全部 9 个回答

mjlyxm

银虫 (文坛精英)

学习了~~
此号弃用
2楼2012-07-11 16:32:27
已阅   回复此楼   关注TA 给TA发消息 送TA红花 TA的回帖
4楼2012-07-11 17:23:59
已阅   回复此楼   关注TA 给TA发消息 送TA红花 TA的回帖

mjlyxm

银虫 (文坛精英)

引用回帖:
3楼: Originally posted by seagrove at 2012-07-11 17:05:42
猫咪!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!...

6楼2012-07-12 11:21:50
已阅   回复此楼   关注TA 给TA发消息 送TA红花 TA的回帖
普通表情 高级回复 (可上传附件)
最具人气热帖推荐 [查看全部] 作者 回/看 最后发表
[考博] 售SCI一区文章,我:8.O.55.1.O.54,科目齐全,可伽急 +3 0XLacIJUOj8D 2026-08-24 3/150 2026-08-25 01:47 by BZKMTicpDhFj
[基金申请] 明天应该可查了!? +5 chengyan1220 2026-08-23 5/250 2026-08-24 23:28 by 我4大白菜
[基金申请] 没有任何消息-是不是就凉了 +7 图啦图啦 2026-08-24 8/400 2026-08-24 22:00 by maomao_da
[基金申请] 我面上完蛋了 +9 且听虎啸 2026-08-20 10/500 2026-08-24 20:08 by 苦寒来香
[基金申请] 能否退出参与的面上项目解除限项 +21 koalala 2026-08-24 24/1200 2026-08-24 19:25 by 家与远方
[基金申请] filecode,4个jtjc了 +14 ziyangfang 2026-08-19 17/850 2026-08-24 18:37 by 哈哈蛤?
[基金申请] 2026国自然函评费到账 +17 羊腰板 2026-08-21 19/950 2026-08-24 16:52 by iaeyuan
[基金申请] 建议基金发布提前给出明确的时间点 +13 kulium 2026-08-21 16/800 2026-08-24 16:27 by superceng
[基金申请] 估计是周四 +4 archvillain 2026-08-18 4/200 2026-08-24 13:53 by zzuzxg
[基金申请] 范进中举一文的中心思想 +6 炎黄贵胄 2026-08-22 7/350 2026-08-24 11:58 by 6543yes
[基金申请] 朋友圈看到的 +7 wangzilk 2026-08-18 9/450 2026-08-24 10:50 by cmrandy
[基金申请] 让我中一个面上吧! +13 大萍1987 2026-08-20 16/800 2026-08-24 10:23 by 太傻了
[基金申请] 2026年的国家社科基金项目通讯评审的新规则与新动向、新挑战 +4 process2012 2026-08-23 5/250 2026-08-23 19:58 by jurkat.1640
[基金申请] 今天放榜吗? +15 布布和一二 2026-08-19 16/800 2026-08-23 09:55 by 张春生
[基金申请] 时间戳今天,20号变了 +5 archvillain 2026-08-20 5/250 2026-08-22 06:12 by hui_daxiao
[基金申请] 看来今天不会放榜了? +8 chengyan1220 2026-08-21 11/550 2026-08-21 17:52 by dcqxinyang
[基金申请] 应该是下周三26日公布了吧? +4 哈哈蛤? 2026-08-21 4/200 2026-08-21 10:58 by Vivilian
[基金申请] 今天放榜没戏了吧 +9 yuleib84 2026-08-19 11/550 2026-08-21 10:06 by gltch
[基金申请] 重要消息,中午系统在维护 +11 yuleib84 2026-08-18 12/600 2026-08-20 11:09 by xskun
[基金申请] 明天放榜? +5 Shxjjxjkx 2026-08-18 5/250 2026-08-18 18:14 by -大大大大大-
信息提示
请填处理意见