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slmyeye

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投稿一个月,收到金属学报《英文版》的审稿意见,郁闷中啊!审稿意见如下:
   This is a very badly written paper, which is almost destroyed by the author’s poor use of English. Theinability to develop a cogent, flowing argument has resulted in fragmented text that fails to: develop the thesis of the paper; adequately link the work with that done previously; and, report the investigation in a manner that would enable another person to repeat the work.
    On the positive side the paper does report an interesting and novel approach to a well known problem,and generates results that will be of interest to metals physicist, and to design engineers. It is for these reasons that the reviewer believes the paper should be carefully rewritten and resubmitted. Acceptance of the paper should only be recommended when an adequate standard of scientific reporting, in good English, has been achieved.
已经发表了两篇SCI,第一次收到这样严厉的审稿意见!,但愿修改稿能顺利
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32楼: Originally posted by visitor958 at 2012-05-18 22:24:27:
我的英语没有审稿人好,但就是觉得他的英语很好。。。不知大家的英语真的都那么好?

为什么没有一个人说审稿人的英语到底有什么大问题?

没大问题,估计是欧洲那边审的稿,写法比较绕,有点故意炫耀自己的语言,写的不如美国人直接。
例如and generates results that will be of interest to metals physicist, and to design engineers.
美国人一般直接 and generates results that will be of interest to metals physicists and design engineers.
而且有个小笔误,physicist应该用复数。
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还好审稿人对你的论文的科学内容作了正面的评价
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这算很好的意见,编辑高兴都来不及。。。就是语言要改一改。

the paper does report an interesting and novel approach to a well known problem,and generates results that will be of interest to metals physicist, and to design engineers
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说话比这个审稿人狠的多了去了。甩给你一句“Bad english”就完了。
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