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21楼2012-03-18 19:53:04
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seapass至尊木虫 (职业作家)
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小丁子: 金币+5, wow~it's so great, you ran the full marathon twice...I really admire you:tiger06::tiger30:, and you know I just run the mini one for 9 kilometer, and so tired:D 2012-04-06 20:03:19 小丁子: 回帖置顶 2012-04-06 20:03:22
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22楼2012-03-18 20:24:01
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bingdian_46金虫 (正式写手)
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高驹至尊木虫 (职业作家)
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24楼2012-03-19 09:36:21
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I found two mistakes in ur article,first,in the second line "then" should be"than".second,"thirty thousands" should be "thirty thousand". 
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