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[求助] 20金币求回复审稿意见磁性纳米材料的吸附方面的

我收到Micro & Nano Letts的审稿意见,小修,不过困惑的是有条意见连个问号都没有,不知道如何修改,编辑是夸我还是说我这样不好,希望内行的同志不吝赐教!如被采纳意见,特给20金币的奖励,谢谢!
意见是1. The Fe3O4-MWNT for Methylene Blue removal has been discussed in a reference paper: N. Yang, S.min Zhu, D. Zhang, and S. Xu, “Synthesis and properties of magnetic Fe3O4-activated carbon nanocomposite particles for dye removal,” Materials Letters, vol. 62, pp. 645-647. However, from what I observe, there does have several improvements from the reference paper to this paper. For example, the saturation magnetization (Ms) was 2.78 emu/g in the reference paper, whereas it is 26.1 emu/g in this paper. The great improvement of this paper is probably due to the preparation of Fe3O4-MWNT. In the reference paper, only +3 Fe (Fe(NO3)3) is used, while the majority +3 Fe might not be reduced to +2 Fe. In this paper, both +3 Fe (FeCl3) and +2 Fe (FeCl2) were used, and the formation of Fe3O4 becomes straightforward. For another example, this paper clearly shows the dye concentration versus adsorption time and the colored picture of sample before and after adsorption of dye; the reference paper has not even show these two important figures
文中说我制备的材料的饱和磁化强度方面,不知道这个Ms是越高越好吗?后来就我的制备方法说了一下,我就是这样制备的呀,还怎么改?还有最后应该是表扬的话吧?
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sxjie2001(金币+2): 谢谢回评 2011-09-08 07:28:24
呵呵,虽然我不是你们方向的,但是看了审稿意见,主要是积极正面的意见呀,还帮你分析了你的文章的创新点在哪里,这样的修改意见只要表示对专家的肯定的感谢就可以了。我不理解Ms是什么作用,但是更不理解你为什么不知道这个是高好还是低好。。。你不是这个方向的吗?呵呵,个人愚见,还是听听你们业内人士的。祝好运!
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