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witch_girl

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flyingsnow4

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13楼: Originally posted by wry3300 at 2011-08-21 09:55:18:
nono  they need····

really? then, I will write
22楼2011-08-21 11:53:34
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18楼: Originally posted by 古可ぷ at 2011-08-21 10:10:42:
he just want gris

he should find a girl
23楼2011-08-21 11:54:17
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23楼: Originally posted by flyingsnow4 at 2011-08-21 11:54:17:
he should find a girl

one
or
more
is
a
question


flyingsnow is beautiful  scenes

are you a snow princess
非吾小天下,才高而已;非吾纵古今,时赋而已;非吾睨九州,宏观而已;三非焉罪?无梦至胜
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22楼: Originally posted by flyingsnow4 at 2011-08-21 11:53:34:
really? then, I will write

enen  come on ~~
此树是我栽,此路是我开,手中一支笔,管挖不管“填”——果果哥
26楼2011-08-21 12:05:31
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27楼2011-08-21 12:07:00
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flyingsnow4

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24楼: Originally posted by 古可ぷ at 2011-08-21 11:58:18:
one
or
more
is
a
question


flyingsnow is beautiful  scenes

are you a snow princess

I believe he just find his only girl
yeah, I like flyingsnow ,so beautiful
I also want to be a snow princess ,it is so hard
28楼2011-08-21 12:15:43
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phu_grassman(金币+2): Thanks for sharing such a beautiful poem. I like it so much. 2011-08-21 13:30:11
phu_grassman: 回帖置顶 Everybody enjoy this beautiful poem, at the bank of the river or in the shade on the campus, that should be a terrific experience. 2011-08-21 13:32:01
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28楼: Originally posted by flyingsnow4 at 2011-08-21 12:15:43:
I believe he just find his only girl
yeah, I like flyingsnow ,so beautiful
I also want to be a snow princess ,it is so hard

when the snow flying,i hear silence of the world ,intoxicate in white tenderness  silent
like the poem


《I like for you to be still》---聂鲁达

I like for you to be still 我喜欢你是寂静的
I like for you to be still, it is as though you were absent我喜欢你是寂静的,仿佛你已不在
and you hear me from far away, and you voice does not touch you. 你在远处聆听,而我的声音却无法触及。
It seems as though your eyes had flown away 似乎你的视线已经飞离远去。
and it seems that a kiss had sealed your mouth. 仿佛一个吻封缄了你嘴
As all things are filled with my soul 正如所有的事物充满了我的灵魂
you emerge from the things, filled my soul. 你从中浮现,充满了我的灵魂
You are like my soul, a butterfly of dream, 你就像我的灵魂,梦中的彩蝶
and you are like the word Melancholy. 你如同忧郁这个词
I like for you to be still, and you seem far away. 我喜欢你是寂静的,似乎你已远去。
It sounds as though you were lamenting, a butterfly cooing like a dove. 你似乎在轻叹,如同白鸽呢喃的蝴蝶。
And you hear me from far away and my voice does not rouch you: 你在远处聆听,我的声音无法触及你:
Let me come to be still in your silence. 让我在你的沉默中寂然。
And let me talk to you with your silence 并且让我借你沉默与你说话
that is brightas a lamp,simple as a ring. 你的沉默明亮如灯,简若圆环。
You are like the night, with it's stillness and constellations. 你就像黑夜,拥有寂静与群星。
Your silence is that of a star, as remore and candid. 你沉默宛若星辰,遥远而明亮。
I like for you to be still, it is as though you were absent, 我喜欢你是寂静的,仿佛你已不在
distant and full of sorrow as though you had died.遥远而且哀伤,仿佛你已仙逝了。  
One word then,one smile,is enough此时,一个字,一个微笑,已经足够。 .
And I am happy, happy that it's not true. 而我会幸福 , 因为那不是真的

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非吾小天下,才高而已;非吾纵古今,时赋而已;非吾睨九州,宏观而已;三非焉罪?无梦至胜
29楼2011-08-21 12:24:30
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flyingsnow4

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29楼: Originally posted by 古可ぷ at 2011-08-21 12:24:30:
when the snow flying,i hear silence of the world ,intoxicate in white tenderness  silent
like the poem


《I like for you to be still》---聂鲁达

I like for you to be still 我喜欢你是 ...

I like the silence and pure world, like the poem you shared
I should say that you have a quick mind
30楼2011-08-21 12:30:46
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