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yanyuqin

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Metal–organic complexes not only have good elements design and potential applications of ion exchange and adsorption, catalysis, and fluorescence. It is the hot point of coordination chemistry to synthesize the complexes with specific function.  
Thiolates have different coordinating modes and good σ-donating capacity, therefore, it is interesting to study the relationship between the synthesis, structures and properties of metal thiolate complex. Metal thiolate complexes have shown potention applications in photoelectric material, catalysts, and medicine. Especially, it’s relatively rare to design and synthesize coordination complexes with the aim of acquiring materials with specific function. For this reasons, two complex unsymmetry mercapto-triazole ligands were synthesized utilizing isonicotiny hydrazide and amino thiourea via nucleophilic substitution reaction. Ligand a-Hptt is 3-(4-pyridine)-4-amino-1,2,4-triazoline-5-thiadone and ligand a-Hmtt is 3-methyl-4-amino-1,2,4-triazoline-5-thiadone. Then, we synthesized eight coordination complexes.
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yanyuqin(金币+5, 博学EPI+1): 2011-05-23 19:30:22
第一句把not only删掉,其他的改为并列结构,用一个and就够了。中间的for this reasons接的是复数应该用these
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2楼2011-05-20 18:32:04
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yanyuqin(金币+5): 2011-05-23 19:30:31
前面有仁兄说了去掉not only。第三行between改成among,第六行reasons改成reason
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yanyuqin(金币+5): 2011-05-23 19:30:39
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Metal–organic complexes not only (删掉) have good elements design and potential applications of ion exchange and adsorption, catalysis, and fluorescence. It is the hot point of coordination chemistry to(改为that) synthesize the complexes with specific function.  
Thiolates have different coordinating modes and good σ-donating capacity, therefore, it is interesting(改为interested) to study the relationship between the synthesis, structures and properties of metal thiolate complex. Metal thiolate complexes have shown potention applications in photoelectric material, catalysts, and medicine. Especially, it’s relatively rare to design and synthesize coordination complexes with(改为in) the aim of acquiring materials with specific function. For this(these) reasons, two complex unsymmetry mercapto-triazole ligands were synthesized utilizing isonicotiny hydrazide and amino thiourea via nucleophilic substitution reaction. Ligand a-Hptt is 3-(4-pyridine)-4-amino-1,2,4-triazoline-5-thiadone and ligand a-Hmtt is 3-methyl-4-amino-1,2,4-triazoline-5-thiadone. Then, we synthesized(改为synthesize) eight
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4楼2011-05-21 11:12:52
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Metal–organic complexes not only (delete)have good elements design and potential applications of ion exchange and adsorption, catalysis, and fluorescence. It is the hot point of coordination chemistry to synthesize the complexes with specific function.  
Thiolates(Thioates) have different (have been different)coordinating modes and good σ-donating capacity,therefore(. Therefore), it is interesting to study the relationship between the synthesis, structures and properties of metal thiolate complex. Metal thiolate complexes have shown potention(potent ion) applications in photoelectric material, catalysts, and medicine. Especially, it’s relatively rare to design and synthesize coordination complexes with the aim of acquiring materials with specific function. For this (these)reasons, two complex unsymmetry (asymmetry)mercapto-triazole ligands were synthesized utilizing isonicotiny(isonicotinic) hydrazide and amino thiourea via nucleophilic substitution reaction. Ligand a-Hptt is 3-(4-pyridine)-4-amino-1,2,4-triazoline-5-thiadone and ligand a-Hmtt is 3-methyl-4-amino-1,2,4-triazoline-5-thiadone. Then, we synthesized eight coordination complexes(complex).

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