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[交流] 【Suggestion】求建议: composition - My view on the income gap

Now , I am preparing 2011 Dr. entrance exam.

I planed to practise the english writing.

here is the topic , about 210 words:

My view on the income gap

If anyone could write a writing sample or just write a piece of words about the topic, I will be very appreciated.

Thanks.

below is mine

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In the present age, the issue of income gap is increasingly disturbing. But in the meantime, whether the phenomena is reasonable has sparked much debate. Some people assert that the income gap helps to improve the social efficiency while many others don’t think so. Personally, I am in favor of the former view.

Convincing arguments can be made that moderate income gap can promote social development. To start with, people should get different salary according to their different contribution. Therefore, those who have good income can stimulate others to work harder. Moreover, the income gap can boost efficiency. Specifically, skilled workers who have 10 year’s experience deserve higher income than those who have only one year experience.

Admittedly, the growing income gap has brought some disadvantages. Some people who have low income are in poverty and can’t provide a good education environment for their children. Obviously this phenomena can result in a series of negative consequences.

In summary, I would concede that income gap has brought some negative effects. Despite that , moderate income gap can significantly boost social efficiency and promote social development. Overall, I am convinced that the government should support moderate income gap and take necessary measure to support who are in poverty, such as providing education , training and so on.

[ Last edited by idance on 2011-2-22 at 12:16 ]

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