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The presence of small rutile crystallites creates a structure where rapid electron transfer from rutile to lower energy anatase lattice trapping sites under visible illumination leads to a more stable charge separation.
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The presence of small rutile crystallites can create a structure where rapid electron transfer from rutile to lower energy anatase lattice trapping sites under visible illumination, leading to a more stable charge separation
A structure will be created with the presence of small rutile crystallites benifical to the rapid transference to anatase lattice trapping sites under visible illumination,exhibiting a more stable charge seperation.
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