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manyno

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[交流] 最近写的一句英语比较纠结,麻烦大家帮忙改改

Recently, various embryo culture conditions such as culture medium, embryo density, protein supplementations and atmosphere have been extensively investigated and optimized, and as a result, the efficiency of in vitro embryo production has been improved remarkably, but still far from completion.
我觉得这句话不太通顺,是不是要改成两句好点?
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发芽土豆(金币+1):谢谢参与 2010-10-07 09:46:01
manyno(金币+3, 翻译EPI+1):3 2010-10-07 14:52:05
把and as a result的and去掉吧,一句话里面有两个and,很别扭,去掉以后我觉得更通顺
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发芽土豆(金币+1):谢谢参与 2010-10-07 09:46:08
manyno(金币+3):3 2010-10-07 14:52:14
ringzhu:1 2010-11-21 10:14:26
Recently, the various embryo culture conditions ,for example the culture medium, embryo density, protein supplementations and the atmosphere have been extensively investigated and optimized。Also ,the efficiency of in vitro embryo production has been improved remarkably, but still far from completing.
非吾小天下,才高而已;非吾纵古今,时赋而已;非吾睨九州,宏观而已;三非焉罪?无梦至胜
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发芽土豆(金币+1):谢谢参与 2010-10-07 09:46:14
manyno(金币+3):3 2010-10-07 14:52:22
Recently, various embryo culture conditions such as culture medium, embryo density, protein supplementations and atmosphere have been extensively investigated and optimized, consequently the efficiency of in vitro embryo production has been improved remarkably, however, still far from completion.
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Recently, embryo culture conditions such as culture medium, embryo density, protein supplementations, and atmosphere have been extensively investigated and optimized.  Also, the efficiency of in vitro embryo production has been greatly improved, but is far from perfect.
~~~O(∩_∩)O~~~
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