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complaint
Recently, more and more people join the ranks of those who complain ，they comment everything occur in China every day,for such a thing, what do you think of these complaint
I really want to know your opinion on complaint.

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1. Talk about your Most concerned about and tell us about it.
2. Tell us something about your opinion .
3. Write in English.
4. Word count is unlimited.
5. We'll give good post 2-10 gold as a reward.
6. We are also happy to see the post that you edited from other's.

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418783132(金币+1):谢谢参与
418783132(金币+2):先谢谢你的支持和建议，我们会尽快反映，具体要根据情况~~请保持关注~~ 2010-05-18 22:16:50
xuchun007(金币+1):追加奖励，谢谢参与。 2010-05-21 15:35:43

First, I’d like to know how long will our activity of “every week’s writing” last? Second, I have a recommendation here, as to any writing submitted here, it should expose to the public acknowledgements and critics, and these acknowledgements and criticisms are welcomed to submit here, also it is better that the moderator or those who get criticisms should make the gold acknowledgement to the advisers.
Ok, the following is my writing for current topics.
Around our life, it is impossible for everything to take place to our desire. There are too many issues and problems we cannot control and understand. accept it or make some differences to better the condition when this case comes into our true life, endless complaints can only add a bad mood in the bad condition.
In our current politics and economy, some solutions lie in ourselves other than in the government or someone else. Don’t complaint too much the worrying security conditions around our life especially around our children, if those children killer had been enlightened by someone before those tragedy, maybe......As for the corruption in the government office, it seems that some complaints only indicate some jealousy, whether would you fall into the swirl of corruption or not if you were a officer?
Lay our most energy on our key points, my advice.