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Both translators and polishers tend to overlook constructions of sentences with unnecessary verbs, because they are grammatically correct and because-precisely-everyone is so accustomed to them. Here are some examples, would you like to find the unnecessary verbs and try to perfect the sentences? 1) we must make an improvement in our work. 2) It is impossible for us to accomplish the transformation of the whole society overnight. 3) We should conduct a careful examination of the computer. 4) We should try to bring about a change in this state of affairs. 5) They must make up their minds to implement the reform of the current system. I really appreciate all the friends' attention here. Till now, we have got the right answer, and the faults-finding activity No. 2 is over. Later on, I will post other sentences for perfection. Looking forward to seeing you all! [ Last edited by shirongjiu on 2010-5-8 at 20:57 ] |
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I tried. 1) we must improve our work. 2) It is impossible for us to transform the whole society overnight. 3) We should examine the computer carefully. 4) We should have a change in this state of affairs. 5) They must make up their minds to reform the current system. |
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