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修改如下：
One Sunday morning, I went to the X Park with my parents by car. After we arrived the garden, we  saw many flowers, red , yellow  and white . Some butterflies were playing and dancing up and down. Some birds were singing sweetly. Then we went to the zoo. In the zoo, we can see many animals, like tigers, panda, zebras and monkeys. The baby elephant named “xixi” was very lovely. Suddenly I saw my classmate Zhao  Qin. I greeted him: “How nice to see you here”.
   When it was 12 o’clock, I was hungry. So we went to KFC. We enjoyed Hamburg, hotdog and ice cream. We had a good lunch. After lunch, I asked “Shall we go to the supermarket？” Dad said “ok”. In the supermarket, we bought many fruits and food. I brought a T-shirt, It looks very smart.
   When we were all  tired, I said “Let’s go home”.
   What a happy day!