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Dear XXX:
The reviews for your manuscript are enclosed with this letter. Please consider the reviewers' comments. They have raised points that require significant consideration and revision of the manuscript before it is suitable for publication. However, with adequate response and revision, the manuscript may be acceptable for publication in Crystal Growth & Design. We would like to receive your revision as soon as possible, 180 days at the latest.
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Sincerely,
Allan S. Myerson
Associate Editor
Crystal Growth & Design
Phone: 312 567 3101
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Email: crystal2@crystal.acs.org
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Reviewer(s)' Comments to Author:
Reviewer: 1
Recommendation: Publish after major revision.
Comments:
The manuscript under review provides a report of worthwhile results & should eventually be published. XXX is one of the most important biomaterials; XXX is highly desirable. In creation of a revised manuscript, the following has to be taken into account:
A) It would be good to provide - or at least give a reference to - a perspective on the role of XXX among biomaterials. Such a perspective has been provided by XXX [1].
B) The English style is rough, what detracts the reader from appreciating the results. Already in the Abstract we read that a relation "was thought".Only thinking was done but no calculations ? What does "caught many attentions all along" mean ? Even the name of Clapyeron is misspelled, not once, we read "Clapyron". The entire manuscript has to be reviewed from the point of view of the English style and corrections introduced accordingly.
C) Real gases do not obey the ideal gas laws. How large or small an error is made using Eq. (2) A brief discussion would help.
D) Eq. (6) appears in the paper 3 times.
Reference:
1. XXX
Originality: Excellent
Technical Quality: Good
Clarity of Presentation: Fair
Importance to Field: Excellent
Please list any possible additional reviewers for this manuscript.:
Reviewer: 2
Recommendation: Publish after major revision.
Comments:
This work and its results, namelly the control over the pore size of "flower like" XXX, are of potential interest and deserve publication.
The manuscript is however ill written and there are many typing and gramatical mistakes. The most important of all is that the name "Clapeyron" has been written "Clapyron".
The equation should be removed from the abstract : it brings nothing at this level.
There are also, more important, technical points :
1. The authors should explain how they calculate or measure the effective pressure in the autoclave. I would prefer a measure than a calculation.
2. Concerning Figure 1 : the authors should add a reference IR spectrum of a regular "XXX" sample.
3. Concerning Figure 2 : the authors should add the position of the diffraction peaks expected for "XXX". These peak positions are available in the form of JCPDS files.
Originality: Good
Technical Quality: Poor
Clarity of Presentation: Fair
Importance to Field: Fair
Please list any possible additional reviewers for this manuscript.:
Date Sent:
20-Jan-2009
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Dear eitor:
Thanks a lot for your reviews to our manuscript. We acknowledge your comments and constructive suggestions very much, which are valuable for improving the quality of our manuscript. We have revised the manuscript according to the reviewers¡¯ comments in detail. We hope, with these modifications and improvements based on your suggestions and the reviewers¡¯ comments, the quality of our manuscript would meet the publication standard of Crystal Growth & Design.
The revisions have been done in the attached manuscript. Some explanations regarding the revisions of our manuscript are as follows. If you have any question, please contact us without hesitate.
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Dear Prof. Dr.XXX:
We are pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been accepted for publication in Crystal Growth & Design. Your manuscript has been forwarded to the ACS Publications office. You will be contacted in the near future by the ACS Journal Publishing Staff regarding the page proofs for your manuscript.
Publication will proceed as soon as your corrections are received. You are advised to read your galley proofs with great care to ensure that any patent issues are resolved before you return your corrections. Corrected papers will typically be published on the Web within 2-5 days of receipt of corrections. Papers with no corrections may be posted in as little as 24 hours.
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We appreciate your cooperation as well as your contribution to Crystal Growth & Design.
Best regards,
Allan S. Myerson
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Dear Editor,
We are very pleased to hear from you for the acceptance and publication of our MS in Crystal Growth & Design (XXX£©
Firstly, may we add Dr. XXX as the second author in this paper£¿ Dr. XXX played an important role in our group. He made a significant contribution to the previous study and this work (such as the study on the preparation and characterization of XXX (the key reference [28] in this paper), the study on the XXX). However, due to our carelessness, his name was omitted from the authors. Thus, we request your agreement to add his name in order to remedy the carelessness. We deeply recognize that it¡¯s serious to add an author after revision and we are sorry for that. The attachments 1 and 2 are the new revised manuscript and the new copyright which might be necessary.
The second is about the Fig. 4, Fig. 5 and the TOC Graphic. We have drawn the three new colorful schematic illustrations (TIF, 600dpi) in order to make the paper more intuitively clear. Shall we use these new illustrations to replace the initial grayscale ones? The attachments 3-5 are the new illustrations which might be necessary.
We are sorry to disturb you and thank you very much for your kind consideration in advance. If you have any question, please contact us without hesitate.
With best regards.
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