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[求助] 求修改句子 该怎么表达呢已有6人参与

A total of 17 amino acids were determined , which mainly contained Gly, Arg, Leu, Lys, Asp et al.

A total of 17 amino acids were determined , and among them Gly, Arg, Leu, Lys, Asp were the main types.
这两种说法正确吗 哪种更准确呢?坐等 谢谢

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yfly520: 金币+3, ★★★很有帮助 2017-03-31 04:27:21
都不对,问题出在措辞是典型的中式表达。第一句为下面这么多词都可以用什么用contain,第二句非常 awkward 母语的人决不会这么写句子
which were:
dominated by
mainly composed of
mainly comprised of
mainly constituted of
mainly made up of
is mainly of
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10楼: Originally posted by agar at 2017-03-31 00:32:51
都不对,问题出在措辞是典型的中式表达。第一句为下面这么多词都可以用什么用contain,第二句非常 awkward 母语的人决不会这么写句子
which were:
dominated by
mainly composed of
mainly comprised of
mai ...

is mainly of ---不小心堆积出错
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A total of 17 amino acids were  identified/detected, which were dominated by Gly, Arg, Leu, Lys, Asp etc.

A total of 17 amino acids were  identified/detected, which were mainly composed of (comprised of, constituted of, made up of) Gly, Arg, Leu, Lys, Asp etc.

A total of 17 amino acids were identified/detected, being mainly of Gly, Arg, Leu, Lys, Asp etc.

前面已经说过,contain 措辞不当,这里不能用,另外et al是指其他人(and others)或其他地方(and elsewhere),虽然汉语翻译成等,但这里不能用这种等,还是措辞不当。
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另外,determined 在这里也不如identified,detected 甚至 found 好,也是措辞问题
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