These features are representative of the energy storage characteristics of an electric double layer, which may have resulted from the hollow tubular and unique through-pore structures. 我的全句是这样的,审稿人认为前半句有语法错误,麻烦帮忙再看一看 ,
These features are representative of the energy storage characteristics of an electric double layer
可以改为
These features represent the energy storage characteristics of an electric double layer
刚刚请教了下我们office的一个老外,他给的建议是:
These features are representative of the energy storage characteristics of an electric double
可以改为:
These features formed a representative of the energy storage characteristics of an electric double
或者改为:
These features served as a representative of the energy storage characteristics of an electric double
另外,他说楼主的那句话那么表示也是ok的.
These features are representative of the energy storage,which is the characteristics of an electric double layer.
These features are representative of the energy storage characteristics of an electric double layer, which may have resulted from the hollow tubular and unique through-pore structures. 我的全句是这样的,审稿人认为前半句有语法错误,麻烦帮忙再看一看
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去掉characteristics,和have
These features are representative of the energy storage characteristics of an electric double layer
可以改为
These features represent the energy storage characteristics of an electric double layer
刚刚请教了下我们office的一个老外,他给的建议是:
These features are representative of the energy storage characteristics of an electric double
可以改为:
These features formed a representative of the energy storage characteristics of an electric double
或者改为:
These features served as a representative of the energy storage characteristics of an electric double
另外,他说楼主的那句话那么表示也是ok的.