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心随我动_cyf

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[交流] 这应该是最后一次机会了 大神们帮我看看这样回复合适不?急急急!!高金币求助

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昨天老师回复第一封邮件:
Thank you for your e-mail and interest in studying at XXXUniversity. I would very much welcome you to be part of my research group in XXX  as a visiting PhD student.

Please let me know how I can support your application and ensure you are able to travel and undertake research in my group.

我打算直接要offer,实在没时间了,我计划这样回复:
I really appreciate your reply.

Thank you so much for your acceptance for me to work in your research group! Would you please send me the following documents since I need to submit them to the China Scholarship Council before the scholarship application deadline which is 10th of March 2015?

1. An invitation letter with official letter-head paper of Durham University. (I am attaching a draft I made based on the requirements of China Scholarship Council (CSC).)
2. Your current curriculum vitae with your signature.
3. My research proposal with your signature. (I am attaching a draft based on the research proposal that I've already sent to you last time.)

This research proposal is used for submitting to CSC instead of the final version. So it can be modified after submitting.

Thank you so much for your time and attention! I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.


求大神们指点有没有什么用词不当或不妥的地方!!在线等……
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心随我动_cyf: 金币+5, 谢谢 2015-03-03 21:41:41
心随我动_cyf: 金币+5 2015-03-14 17:10:49
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心随我动_cyf: 金币+10 2015-03-03 23:44:24
CV最好控制在3页以内,要不然给你个几十页的就凌乱了
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3楼: Originally posted by changdadutao at 2015-03-03 22:56:54
CV最好控制在3页以内,要不然给你个几十页的就凌乱了

晕 把这茬给忘了 已经发过去了
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心随我动_cyf: 金币+1 2015-03-04 08:16:45
心随我动_cyf: 金币+9 2015-03-04 08:16:58
The research proposal that I attached will be used for the CSC application. However, the content is possible to be modified again anytime if you have some additional advice!
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5楼: Originally posted by chana1980 at 2015-03-04 01:09:57
The research proposal that I attached will be used for the CSC application. However, the content is possible to be modified again anytime if you have some additional advice!

谢谢!
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