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[求助] journal of luminescence 技术审查问题求助

虫友们好,我最近投了一篇发光杂志的文章,结果3天后就收到退稿信了,说技术审查没有通过。具体如下:
      Thank you for submitting your work to Journal of Luminescence. Your manuscript has been checked against formal technical criteria (structure of submission, adherence to the Guide for Authors and English language usage). We regret to inform you that we will not send your manuscript to the reviewer in its current state. Before we can send your manuscript out for peer review, please make changes/corrections as mentioned in the comments below.

      The language is not concise enough to read. There are instances of wrongly used words or phrases, badly constructed sentences, grammatical errors, and spelling mistakes, such as "The introduction of donative elecrton group can increase the HOMO and LUMO energy levels of the title terbium complexes, but the result of introduction of electrophilic group was just opposite", "Rare earth complexes have been attracted significant attention about their fluorescent broad applications in medicinal chemistry [1], material chemistry [2] and biochemistry [3] due to unique physical and chemical properties of rare earth ions", "Meanwhile, pyrazolone and its derivatives, especially 4-acyl pyrazolone, are an important heterocyclic compounds containing N, O atoms and can be used as chelating agent, which have attracted considerable scientific and applied interest in pharmaceutical and biological reagents, metallurgy, dyes, luminescent materials", "Molar conductivity of the complexes in N,N'-dimethylformamide (DMF) were measured at room temperature with an DDS-12A digital direct reading conductivity meter", "Chloroacetic acid (0.04 mol, 3.78 g) was dissolved in 12 mL distilled water in a 50 mL beaker, then 10 mL of 25% sodium hydroxide solution was added dropwise obtained sodium chloroacetate solution", "The solid was filtered and recrystallized from ethanol obtain white crystals, and dried under vacuum to get phenoxyacetic acid 1'a", "The synthesis procedure of the compounds 3'a~g is similar, so only the 2-phenoxyacetohydrazide 3'a has been selected for illustration"


Please check the manuscript carefully and thoroughly to refine the language. Please do not revise only the samples indicated in the comments, which are highlighted as serious problems.


虫友们有最近投过这个杂志的吗?急,现在不知道怎么办。他的这个技术审查是不是最近新加的呀,以前我有师兄投过这个杂志,好像没说说要技术审查呀。有遇到同样问题的虫友们吗?能否一起分享下解决办法?谢谢了!
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junzy

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感谢参与,应助指数 +1
就是按要求修改啊。
我的也是技术审查不合格,修改再投,后面送审了。
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junzy

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英语不好的话,送到外面的论文修改公司去润色。
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yupengfei

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感谢参与,应助指数 +1
我投了一次,也是这样,要求修改语法之类的,我改了之后投过去就送审了。你最好认真修改一下,至于能不能送审就看你改得怎么样了,祝你好运!
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飞扬8812

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4楼: Originally posted by yupengfei at 2013-08-04 14:43:24
我投了一次,也是这样,要求修改语法之类的,我改了之后投过去就送审了。你最好认真修改一下,至于能不能送审就看你改得怎么样了,祝你好运!

Since the fluorescence spectra of all the title complexes were similar, only the fluorescence spectra of TbL6(NO 3 ) 3 *2H 2 O was selected for illustration.

你好,我想问问你我这句话有问题吗?编辑指出来说这句话有问题。谢谢了!
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yupengfei

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后半句有问题,应该是only the fluorescence spectrum of TbL6(NO 3 ) 3 *2H 2 O was selected for illustration. (spectra是复数,后面应该跟were才对)
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你好  麻烦请问这个杂志投稿时 图片是单独分别上传 还是把所有图放在一个word中 上传   还有supplymentary data 怎么上传的  谢谢
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