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Reviewer #1: A.Originality
This paper presents a drawing mode for heavy servo press with an optimisation model for the maximum production rate in drawing process. Although a merit signifcance in this text was observed, the aim of the study was not clearly stated. The authors are recommended to clarify aim, intention and causes.
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The subject of the paper is relevant to the scope of the journal (IJAMT.).

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-The authors are requested to explain practical benefits of the results presented in this study.
-The authors are required to add some reference for particular names to show specific characteristics (e.g. Komatsu, Schuler etc.).
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1)A.Osma, An assessment of the robustness of gauge repeatability and reproducibility analysis in automotive components, Proc. I. Mech. Engs., Part D: Journal of Automobile Engineering July 2011 Vol. 225, No.7, pp.895-912.
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Reviewer #2: 1.In this paper, author showed an efficient drawing mode for heavy servo press and analysized four key control points are employed to meet the drawing process requirements. In addition, a flexible acc/dec control algorithm for servo motor is discussed. all of those have the inovation, and take advantage of the industres.
2.Author should polish your english and try your best to use the written language
so I advice this paper should be accepted
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