Dear Mr.XXX:
I have received the reports from our advisors on your manuscript, "XXX", which you submitted to International Journal of Advanced Manufacturing Technology.
(问题:这篇论文中的几率多大啊?)
Based on the advice received, I have decided that your manuscript could be reconsidered for publication should you be prepared to incorporate major revisions. When preparing your revised manuscript, you are asked to carefully consider the reviewer comments which are attached, and submit a list of responses to the comments. Your list of responses should be uploaded as a file in addition to your revised manuscript.
In order to submit your revised manuscript electronically, please access the following web site:
Regional Editor
COMMENTS FOR THE AUTHOR:
Reviewer #1: A.Originality
This paper presents a drawing mode for heavy servo press with an optimisation model for the maximum production rate in drawing process. Although a merit signifcance in this text was observed, the aim of the study was not clearly stated. The authors are recommended to clarify aim, intention and causes.
(问题:审稿人说目标、目的和原因叙述不清楚,是要求我在在序言中详细描述目标、目的和原因吗?)
B.Scope
The subject of the paper is relevant to the scope of the journal (IJAMT.).
C.Quality, technical depth and accuracy
-The authors are requested to explain practical benefits of the results presented in this study.
-The authors are required to add some reference for particular names to show specific characteristics (e.g. Komatsu, Schuler etc.).
问题:这个意见是要求我添加这些公司开发的产品的特征吗?我在论文中写了:这些公司具备生产这种产品的能力。
-The authors are invited to describe the reason and usefulness of the flow chart [1].
问题:流程图中描述的是一种优化算法,审稿专家的意见是要我描述采用这种算法的原因和实用性,还是让我描述采用这种算法的原因和使用方法啊?
-The authors are recommended to re-write reference list to adjust the text/document.
问题:我个人感觉我要是对论文进行大改的话,肯定会重新调整参考文献。但是审稿人单独列出这个建议,我不太明白审稿人的想法。
D.Presentation
The authors are required to apply a scale to figures (Fig. 7, 8, and 12) to realise dimensions of the elements shown in figures.
问题:论文中图片7、8和12都是设备、模具和生产零件的实物照片,我没看懂这句话是什么意思?
E.References
1)A.Osma, An assessment of the robustness of gauge repeatability and reproducibility analysis in automotive components, Proc. I. Mech. Engs., Part D: Journal of Automobile Engineering July 2011 Vol. 225, No.7, pp.895-912.
问题:审稿人单独列出这条参考文献,是让我引用吗?还是让我参考这篇文献写作啊,可是这篇文献与我的论文内容也不相符啊?
Reviewer #2: 1.In this paper, author showed an efficient drawing mode for heavy servo press and analysized four key control points are employed to meet the drawing process requirements. In addition, a flexible acc/dec control algorithm for servo motor is discussed. all of those have the inovation, and take advantage of the industres.
2.Author should polish your english and try your best to use the written language
so I advice this paper should be accepted
问题:我需要找一个英语母语的老师帮我润色吗?
我第一次投外文杂志,有很多不明白的地方,请各位虫友不吝赐教啊,在线等。 |