【答案】应助回帖

11楼2012-05-10 17:06:01

east_rock

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【答案】应助回帖

感谢参与，应助指数 +1

语言问题都是小问题。修改了即可。还是恭喜！

坚持创新思想，才不至于思想变的腐朽。

12楼2012-05-10 17:46:19

yanwuliaorao

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【答案】应助回帖

感谢参与，应助指数 +1

没啥好办法。英语又不是一朝一夕的事。立杆见影的方法是找外援帮你润色。最好是同行。

阳光总在风雨后！

13楼2012-05-10 18:55:33

leimiao_hit

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感谢参与，应助指数 +1

I have reviewed this manuscript for a second time but unfortunately there is no much improvement. 找一个外教帮你改一下

..........回首向来萧瑟处，归去，也无风雨也无晴...........

14楼2012-05-10 19:16:32

weiyusen

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感谢参与，应助指数 +1

提高自己最重要，靠别人要到什么时候？自己一句一句改，一句一句的比较文献里别人是怎么写的

迷糊啊！

15楼2012-05-10 19:23:21

cheetah1983

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谢谢各位的鼓励。我找了个公司帮忙润色了一下，花了1400元，然后被接受了，前前后后总共一年半的时间，元气大伤啊

16楼2012-06-18 10:41:21

allen_yangjie

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花钱找公司修吧

17楼2012-06-18 10:58:02

云藏岁月

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Dear Mr. XXX I have assessed the revised manuscript you submitted, and have found that there are an extensive number or flaws and errors in the new text and in the existing text. Hence, the manuscript is not suitable for publication. I can not consider this revised submission, and have to reject your manuscript. For your guidance, I have listed some of the issues below. If you are able to address the comments, you may consider submitting the manuscript as a new manuscript. I have to make clear though that the present manuscript contains many flaws and will require very extensive improvements throughout the text. Thank you for giving us the opportunity to consider your work.
Yours sincerely, Editor Materials Science & Engineering A
Editor's comments:
– There are flaws in English expression in the new text added to this revision.
– Throughout the revised manuscript there are many flaws in English expression.
– Origin of the equipment is often not clearly stated (e.g. what is 'Holland': it is neither a company nor a country)
–There are several typographic errors in the manuscript
– Some abbreviations are not explained
修改后被拒，英语写作问题多，如果找个公司修改后重新投，有希望录取吗？

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