| 查看: 2457 | 回复: 12 | |||
[交流]
ssci2区投稿现收到大修，请各位友友帮忙看看呀！已有7人参与
|
|||
|
两月初投的ssci 6.2给回复了 7月14日前上传文件。 第一次投稿啊，还是自己一个在做学术，没有团队，所以跪求友友们帮我看看给给意见！！ （第一次写稿不一定图片可以加进来，所以把审稿意见等文字版本发出来了 Referee: 1 Comments to the Author This manuscript studies the impact of two forms of government innovation assistance programs - innovation subsidies and tax refunds - on the R&D production of Chinese pharmaceutical companies. This is a very interesting research topic for us. The study tests a number of hypotheses and draws conclusions through quantitative analysis. However, I would like to see more concrete raw data on the quantitative analysis. Otherwise, I do not find it very convincing. I would also like to see a specific discussion of the differences from previous studies. I believe the paper will be even better if you do so. More specifically, I am worried about the following points. (1) The authors present many hypotheses which are H1a, H1b, H2a, H2b, H3a, H3b, H4a, and H4b and analyze them quantitatively. The variable definitions and descriptive statistics are listed in Table1 and Table2 and the regression results for each model are shown the Table 3, Table 4, Table 5, Table 6, and Table 7. These results are then used to test the hypotheses and draw conclusions. However, the actual contents of Table1 and Table2 are black boxes, and there is no way to verify them. Also, there seems to be no explanation of the model from 1 to 4. (2) Also, regarding the INPI that means the total number of patents in Table 1, the results are not compared and discussed with those of Cappelen et al. (2012) and Moretti and Wilson (2014), which are cited as previous studies. There is no crucial discussion of how the current results in China differ from the results in those other countries and also the reason why in this manuscript. I cannot make an accurate judgment because I lack the materials to make a solid decision. Referee: 2 Comments to the Author Dear Author(s), Overall paper is very well written and meets the required standards. However, a few suggestions are put forward to make its worth reading. 1. Abstract: A paragraph on methodology can make it a comprehensive abstract. 2. Literature review should be updated with a few recent papers i.e. 2020-21 3. Methodology: Page 09, line 36, 'Special Treatment (ST*) need to be defined in comprehensive way for the readers. 4. Moderator: page 11, The author(s) should clearly explain the time line and technique used to collect the primary data. 5. VIF threshold reference is missing. Author(s) may consider to provide even conservative reference due to given results. 6. It was observed that Author(s) have used different styles of result reporting, it may be uniformed with providing beta value and p-values i.e. page 17, line 55-60 7. Discussion and Conclusion: Author(s) must add some references in (Point-2) to strengthen the discussion part as provided in the same section i.e. (1 and 3) 8. Page 30, line 47, I guess it must be competitiveness rather than 'competitive' 9. In my opinion, a separate section on limitations and future research directions can make study worth reading. Editor的主要倾向是：You will see that although the referees find some merit in the paper it is required that substantial revisions be done before we can consider it further. Nevertheless, we do hope that you will be able to undertake the additional work on the paper and look forward to receiving a revised manuscript in due course. 很惶恐！主编的意思是能不能中呢？还有Referee: 1在说的black boxes 是啥意思？是在说我的数据论证不清晰么？还是在觉得我数据不真实呢？？ 球球了 帮我给点意见吧！！！！ 比心 |
回复此楼» 猜你喜欢
想问一下有没有需要文章但是没时间带学生的研究生导师。
已经有18人回复
-
颜宁:基础研究应顶天立地,立地即从需求端作为问题的出发点,立项背景就是面向真实需求
已经有3人回复
-
发现督导在听课，需要跟TA招呼示意吗？有同学看手机、课件有疏漏算大问题吗？
已经有4人回复
-
催稿后秒拒
已经有6人回复
-
前同事拿我以前未中的国自然标书申请今年的国自然，现在基金委发来调查函
已经有10人回复
-
298求调剂
已经有9人回复
-
申请省自然科学基金，研究区能否是省外区域
已经有13人回复
-
国内科研环境差导致国内科研水平差的根源
已经有3人回复
-
CSC在职申请求问
已经有7人回复
-
家乡二本高校/沿海传统私企，如何抉择？
已经有15人回复
SenX
金虫 (正式写手)
- 应助: 1 (幼儿园)
- 金币: 1141.3
- 散金: 50
- 红花: 1
- 帖子: 456
- 在线: 49.8小时
- 虫号: 7696310
- 注册: 2017-12-29
- 性别: GG
- 专业: 遥感机理与方法
3楼2022-06-10 08:42:33
holypower
至尊木虫 (知名作家)
- 应助: 14 (小学生)
- 金币: 18805.9
- 散金: 629
- 红花: 22
- 沙发: 2
- 帖子: 8722
- 在线: 359.6小时
- 虫号: 7060301
- 注册: 2017-08-14
- 专业: 社会心理学
5楼2022-06-10 09:41:22
6楼2022-06-10 09:58:45
1018415371
新虫 (正式写手)
- 应助: 0 (幼儿园)
- 金币: 2118.7
- 散金: 2654
- 红花: 2
- 帖子: 654
- 在线: 66小时
- 虫号: 2881841
- 注册: 2013-12-19
- 专业: 自身免疫性疾病
2楼2022-06-10 08:36:25
4楼2022-06-10 08:50:19
EmeraldTSS
银虫 (初入文坛)
- 应助: 0 (幼儿园)
- 金币: 1407.8
- 散金: 24
- 帖子: 28
- 在线: 5.3小时
- 虫号: 26242675
- 注册: 2021-04-19
- 专业: 外国语言
★
小木虫: 金币+0.5, 给个红包，谢谢回帖
小木虫: 金币+0.5, 给个红包，谢谢回帖
|
从编辑审稿和编辑意见来看，论文很有希望： 1. his is a very interesting research topic for us. 说明选题很对口，是期刊非常感兴趣的话题。 2. I would like to see more concrete raw data on the quantitative analysis。 量化分析需要更加具体的原始数据。 3. I would also like to see a specific discussion of the differences from previous studies。需要具体讨论与此前研究的区别。 4. Referee 2 提供出了论文摘要、文献回顾、研究方法、讨论与结论等部分需要改进的地方。 几个主要问题：1）文献回顾当加入几篇采用近期文献；2） 与此前研究区别要讲清楚，本论文提出了什么新观点？有什么新发现？3）. 量化分析数据，有足够的原始数据支持你的论点；4）文章写作方面的问题。 |
7楼2022-06-10 10:41:44
kmght
铁杆木虫 (知名作家)
AP
- 应助: 615 (博士)
- 金币: 8588.9
- 散金: 1233
- 红花: 82
- 沙发: 1
- 帖子: 5967
- 在线: 854.1小时
- 虫号: 4245445
- 注册: 2015-11-25
- 专业: 生物海洋学与海洋生物资源
8楼2022-06-10 16:28:38
9楼2022-06-14 22:05:53
小果冻123
金虫 (著名写手)
- 应助: 0 (幼儿园)
- 金币: 7253.2
- 散金: 20
- 红花: 4
- 沙发: 3
- 帖子: 2132
- 在线: 186.5小时
- 虫号: 10610309
- 注册: 2018-10-09
- 专业: 管理科学与工程
10楼2022-06-28 09:57:53
100