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     This paper analyses the *******************************. While the topic of the paper is well suited to the scope of the journal, and its scientific contribution seems significant to the related field, this manuscript needs to be better prepared before it is considered to be published.

     Most of all, not all figures mentioned in the main text are presented. Thus the figure numbers in the text and figure title do not match which makes very difficult to review. Also, there are numerous numbers of variables and parameters. I'd suggest to include a table that describes variables and parameters.

    While the main focus of this research is to examine the *******, it is not clear how this strategy is applied. I think it should be more elaborated so the readers can reproduce the results.

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    In this sense this work is interesting because it marries (for the first time as far as I know) the more complicated solution of the **** theory insteadof the simplified****, with an analysis of the ********of the network in order to ************* to increase robustness.

    Another useful feature of this work is to ****************************

    Still, I feel that because this problem has been looked through so many different techniques, ** and **, that it would increase tremendously theusefulness of this particular work and make it worth publication  if a comparison could be included on the results that one would get through some of the other methods, to compare the usefulness of the current proposed approach.

     In summary, I feel that this is an interesting an original work, but the problems mentioned should be addressed before the paper is ready for publication.

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