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In a way that can be accepted as it is supposed to be some sort of design guide. However, neither the research aspect nor the design aspect has
come out, in the presented writing, in a significant manner.
In this work, there is an extensive literature survey, and serious attempt to develop the model based on previous work and fundamentals. Yet the
results appear to be not representing a generic case that could be used in the case of designs of thermal system under consideration. So, how the findings could be used as a design guideline need to be expressed clearly.
When it comes to conclusions, some are specific as well as some are general understandings written in the form of conclusions.
This work could be part of a PhD research or some similar work, and has potential to be developed into a serious publication. I believe the authors
should be encouraged to do that. 返回小木虫查看更多