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Dear ~~~~,
I'm ~~n, a 2nd year PhD candidate from School of Chemical Engineering and Technology, ~~~ University, ~~~, P. R. China, supervised by Prof.~~~~~. To want to know whether an opening for a visiting student is available, I write this letter. If the application for co-educate PhD programme supported by China Scholarship Council is approved, I will be supported by a Chinese National Fund, which will support those PhD candidates in China to go abroad to some world class Universities of their fields. This programme will cover all living cost I need in USA.
UCLA is one of the world-famous universities, where many students dream to go. For a long time, I am very interested in the research of drug delivery and the application of nanotechnology. After browsing your web site, I understand that you are working on nanotechnology, biomaterials and drug delivery and have published quite a lot of high level scientific papers. As such, you are the leading researcher in this area in the world. I find the research of biomaterials and drug delivery in your group attracts me deeply, so I write to you to see if you can give me a chance to study in your group.
As an interdisciplinary science, Biochemical Engineering need many researchers from diverse domains, I want to try my best to devote myself into it.
My CV and published papers have been attached. And if you think I’ m not suitable to the research in your group or you have a better recommendation whose research areas fit me well, please inform me. Really hope to hear from you as soon as possible!
Yours sincerely，
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的自己动手先写，然后找有经验的人改
不要啥都不做就全问， 都是这么过来的，写的再不好也不会有人笑话的
把你的目的,你自己的个人情况写清楚就ok了
问他是否愿意要你.
论坛里有很多陶瓷信啊
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给你贴个
Dear ~~~~,
I'm ~~n, a 2nd year PhD candidate from School of Chemical Engineering and Technology, ~~~ University, ~~~, P. R. China, supervised by Prof.~~~~~. To want to know whether an opening for a visiting student is available, I write this letter. If the application for co-educate PhD programme supported by China Scholarship Council is approved, I will be supported by a Chinese National Fund, which will support those PhD candidates in China to go abroad to some world class Universities of their fields. This programme will cover all living cost I need in USA.
UCLA is one of the world-famous universities, where many students dream to go. For a long time, I am very interested in the research of drug delivery and the application of nanotechnology. After browsing your web site, I understand that you are working on nanotechnology, biomaterials and drug delivery and have published quite a lot of high level scientific papers. As such, you are the leading researcher in this area in the world. I find the research of biomaterials and drug delivery in your group attracts me deeply, so I write to you to see if you can give me a chance to study in your group.
As an interdisciplinary science, Biochemical Engineering need many researchers from diverse domains, I want to try my best to devote myself into it.
My CV and published papers have been attached. And if you think I’ m not suitable to the research in your group or you have a better recommendation whose research areas fit me well, please inform me. Really hope to hear from you as soon as possible!
Yours sincerely，
这些前辈都说得很好
个人感觉最好别用所谓的模板，写个陶瓷信，都模板。那以后还怎么整啊，再说大家都模板的话老外说不定就看到同样的 两封，你猜他会作何感想、其实邮件本身只要你把自己的意思表达清楚了就行了，就算有少许语言错误他们也会谅解的，毕竟是我们的二外，你想啊，假如一个外国人给你用汉语写信，只要他表达清楚自己的意思，你会因为他的少许语言错误而否定它么
PS 反正我就是自己写的，然后附件是CV， 就这样。同时要把自己放在一个同等的地位，不要过于自卑，过多的用尊敬的，贵单位等等中国特色化的语言
对正常写就行，把意思表达清楚就行。如果那边导师挑毛病太多说明他本身水平人品也不咋地。
不用过多担心